Sunday, December 19, 2010

Easter Island

I realy want to visit this place. Since a was a child I liked its culture, landscapes and moais. And I've always been facinated with the idea to visit some island, I think that to be in a piece of land surronded by sea, it´s very cool!!

I've never visit it before, but If I can adjust my vacations and save some money, I would like to go there, I could relax, swiming and visit all the historical and icons places, like Rapa Nui National Park, and take a lot of pictures, of course.

I'm sure that it would be one of my best vacation

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  1. PaulaDecember 27, 2010 at 11:06 AM

    Hi Hector,

    Comments:

    I´d rather say, "I have liked this place since I was a child" (present perfect necessary)

    And "I have always wanted to be in peace" (Not "piece" (a part, a piece of cake)).

    Also, "I have never been there before" or "I have never visited it before"

    And finally, if you say "could relax, the next verb also has to be the base form, so "swim".

    Your work needs more editing, Hector.

    See you.

    Paula

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